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I love the Russian doll style
Posted on Sat, 09 Jan 2016
I love the Russian doll style of this, the inside- outness that takes you to that haunting. It works even better for the compact run-on structure - no stanzas or white space. A very novel way of telling history via landmarks.
Read full commentPosted in 'The Way Through the Woods'
Richly animated and original
Posted on Sun, 27 Dec 2015
Richly animated and original writing
Read full commentPosted in The Serene Fellowship 1 The Green Serene Part Two
This is lovely. Seemingly
Posted on Sat, 26 Dec 2015
This is lovely. Seemingly light, an expert of his trade and yet the vulnerability rarely seen. Homelessness is the main political issue that I get on my soapbox about and have to be carried off still yelling about it. Social attitudes in the UK...
Read full commentPosted in The Guy Pushing Big Issue
And still the world turns.
Posted on Wed, 23 Dec 2015
And still the world turns. Tilts, to be precise. This is a feast of unexpected imagery and surprising new perspectives on things we know. Deeply sad but has a keen sense of restoration with it.
Read full commentPosted in Stars of Wonder
The visuals scaffold the
Posted on Wed, 23 Dec 2015
The visuals scaffold the transitory nature of time with delicacy. A very pretty piece with a Romanticist feel to it.
Read full commentPosted in Reprise (Poetry Monthly)
I really liked the strange
Posted on Mon, 21 Dec 2015
I really liked the strange clean lines of this nostalgia.
Read full commentPosted in Iggy Pop's Eyes, Manchester Apollo 1977
The antibiotic tee full of
Posted on Sun, 13 Dec 2015
The antibiotic tea full of mould, the apologetic phonecall, the up before the down - seemingly unrelated until the close. Very well done. We (collectively) join the dots post suicide. A very true piece that does much deeper work than apologies.
Read full commentPosted in Life is a Book of Apologies
It's a feast for the eyes. It
Posted on Tue, 08 Dec 2015
It's a feast for the eyes. It must have taken some arranging. Has real impact and I like how you've clustered words too.
Read full commentPosted in Sprayed Words (Poetry Monthly)
Welcome to ABCRales. I liked
Posted on Thu, 10 Dec 2015
Welcome to ABCTales. I liked this story, full of sensory detail and the flashback device works well.
Read full commentPosted in System Reboot
Love it. Absolutely love this
Posted on Tue, 08 Dec 2015
Love it. Absolutely love this. It's small, strong, statemented, shapely, says something, carries lots of weight, like the gorgeous mother and babe up there being shocking, like the sharp dual profile of both a baby sucking and a breast.
Read full commentPosted in Flesh in Profile (poetry monthly)
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