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and 129 of my stories have been cherry picked. 19 of my 312 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 19 votes
They are giving Corinne a new drip, I have to go, they don’t want me to watch. My child! Each time she gets poked, I’m sent away, a rabbit caught in...
Listen, can you hear it? A symphony formed, each note a soft breath from the shadows of lost lives, the myriad of worlds that have come, then slipped...
In a quiet lab, wires twist and bend, A robot sits, metal heart ticking, Fingers poised over keys like a child at play, In the hum of bright lights,...
19 of my comments have received 19 Great Feedback votes
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I was walking with you
Posted on Tue, 14 Feb 2023
I was walking with you through long years of Memory Lane where magic converts all those rays of light and shadows into a beautiful tapestry loved and appreciated throughout the years. What would we do without those memories!
a ray of hope for our deprived earth, dandelions, lions in the plantlife, full of vigour, perseverance and with "lion's teeth", therefore the name, a reference to the tooth-like serrations on their leaves...they will still be there after we are...
The story becomes touchingly alive in your poem. I lived with you, her, through the various stages and felt deep emotion reading about pain, sorrow and lastly forgiveness and coming to terms with life.
As I love Paris I enjoyed every bit of your brilliantly told sto
Posted on Wed, 20 Feb 2019
As I love Paris I enjoyed every bit of your brilliantly told story, you brought Paris alive in detailed and vivid descriptions and enticed with the emotional dimensions of a relationship. I especially loved the ending which pointed towards life’...
I was walking with you
Posted on Tue, 14 Feb 2023
I was walking with you through long years of Memory Lane where magic converts all those rays of light and shadows into a beautiful tapestry loved and appreciated throughout the years. What would we do without those memories!
from Yutka
Read full commentPosted in For The Love Of Village Life
Stuck? Living in today is the
Posted on Sun, 27 Jan 2013
Stuck? Living in today is the only thing beneficial to us....still like your poem, it speaks some truths...
Read full commentPosted in Changes
thank you for this truly
Posted on Wed, 30 Sep 2020
thank you for this truly outstanding poem, with its many different piuctures to illuminate thought, I very much enjoyed it
Read full commentPosted in Deus Ex Machina
a ray of hope for our
Posted on Tue, 21 Jul 2020
a ray of hope for our deprived earth, dandelions, lions in the plantlife, full of vigour, perseverance and with "lion's teeth", therefore the name, a reference to the tooth-like serrations on their leaves...they will still be there after we are...
Read full commentPosted in remembering dandelions (again)
The story becomes touchingly
Posted on Thu, 04 Apr 2019
The story becomes touchingly alive in your poem. I lived with you, her, through the various stages and felt deep emotion reading about pain, sorrow and lastly forgiveness and coming to terms with life.
love to you from Yutka
Read full commentPosted in The mask melting at 98
As I love Paris I enjoyed every bit of your brilliantly told sto
Posted on Wed, 20 Feb 2019
As I love Paris I enjoyed every bit of your brilliantly told story, you brought Paris alive in detailed and vivid descriptions and enticed with the emotional dimensions of a relationship. I especially loved the ending which pointed towards life’...
Read full commentPosted in La Femme d'argent
Thank you, you just got what
Posted on Mon, 12 Nov 2018
Thank you, you just got what I meant....not many will do...I just bought vol 2 of her letters published this year, 1025 pages...and read them all.
Read full commentPosted in Weeping Willow
It is an art
Posted on Sat, 08 Aug 2015
It is an art to make rubbish look exquisite and beautiful! You certainly have mastered it.
yutka :)
Read full commentPosted in Dummy (Poetry monthly)
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