Changes

By Hades502

Sun, 27 Jan 2013
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14 comments
 

Changes are spawning, new faces are dawning
The old ones are blowing away
Yesterday's gone, tomorrow is coming
We're eternally stuck in today

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Comments

Submitted by scratch on
Short and sweet Gawain. There's a nice synergy in there which I also like a lot.

 

Submitted by scratch on
Sorry, I forgot . Welcome to the site.

 

Submitted by Hades502 on
Thank you, Scratch, for both the welcome and the critique. I look forward to reading some of your writing.

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Submitted by Bee on
Brief, to the point and true. Bee
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Submitted by Hades502 on
Thanks, Bee. I am not a poet. I actually wrote this 25 years ago. I added to it, to make it longer, and it wasn't very good. I probably have 20 poems under my belt, but I think they all suck. So, this is probably the only one anyone will ever see. I'm more prose. It was simple and right at the time. And none of my poetry has been ever since then.

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Submitted by Fatboyfat on
This is great...

Submitted by Hades502 on
Thanks Fatboy

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Submitted by lavadis on
great fun - good writing

 

Submitted by Hades502 on
Thank you lavadis. I will attempt to dive into some of your work. I noticed multiple cherries and I am interested in "Ex" as I have a couple of those if you are referring to wives, that is. GGHades502

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Submitted by Hades502 on
Wow, thanks much Celena. Appreciated hearing your sentiments. GGHades502

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Submitted by denni1 on
Love this. Short n sweet xx

Submitted by Hades502 on
Thank you Denise, Appreciate your comments GGHades502

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Submitted by Yutka on

Stuck? Living in today is the only thing beneficial to us....still like your poem, it speaks some truths...

 

Submitted by Hades502 on

Maybe. Beneficial or not, I used the word stuck because we may want to live in tomorrow or yesterday sometimes, but we can't. Thanks for reading and commenting.

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