Breakfast Haiku

By capoeiragem

Thu, 07 Feb 2008
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Chopped bananas and
frozen açaí berries,
melting in the sink.

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Submitted by kim.rooney on
I'm not good at Haikus, or chopping fruit. Breakfast this morning was a banana mush- disappointing and not at all reviving like this Haiku and its clean tingling image.

Kim Rooney

Submitted by littleditty on
lol - vitamin C in abundance - delicious and visual

 

Submitted by capoeiragem on
lol it certainly seems to do the trick after a late night... Thanks for the comment littleditty, glad you liked it.

Submitted by capoeiragem on
Glad you enjoyed it Kim, I must admit Haikus are not normally my speciality either so I appreciate your comment. 'Clean tingling image', I like that, thanks! Oh, and I hope today's breakfast was a little more satisfying than yesterday's! lol