D Minus
By littleditty
Tue, 01 Apr 2008
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There was a sonnet twenty years ago
D Minus and written under duress
Little rhyme rebel and iambic flight
Scribbled in the middle of the longest night.
Witnessed, on the tips of tongues one more time,
Wriggling on the end of my fishing line
Behind blindfolded years I'm cutting loose -
'Grinning fish flying through the glaze...' Oh Joy!
Amazing...light flapping gills...sequins...of
Horror. Thirty years ago a pink pearl,
Wicker, basket, reeds, sonnet, river, ditch,
"Take the hook from its lip! Swim, little fish!
Swim!" Joy...Horror, weep, shiver...how now I
Missed to be with you...the fish, the river.
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This is lovely and
Permalink Submitted by onemorething on
This is lovely and beautifully written. I liked your latest cherry picked one too and the line about weaving cats' cradles from light' has popped back into my head several times since reading it. I liked 'grinning fish' in this and the whole imagery of it.
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