Choices
By Green_14
Thu, 05 Jun 2008
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Making choices is another part of life. It's not about making the right or wrong choice. In fact what are the right choices and the wrong choices. Can you tell me? To you it's the perfect choice. It just might be the right or wrong choice in other people's eyes. To you it's the best choice because what happens there on after everything could change by making a choice wether it's for the bad or the good.
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this is a valid piceof
this is a valid piceof writing in it's own right, but you dould domore with it, it is the precursor to a longer poem, if you want it to be. you are investigating what it is to be human, and recognise the potential of making choices. For instance, youcould make the thought process more immediate,
How to choose? In all confusion
choice obsesses me, spins
me round , rolls me over till
I am thrown further
away from the space I knew
I used to inhabit.
etc, it's just a thought, you could go anywhere with it.
anipani
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