Hot Summer Blues
By Ewan
Sun, 27 Jul 2008
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Shed snake skin at the side of the track:
burned rubber hose turns the dry dust black,
hot ground scalding through tarpaper shoes,
who said the cold was the mother of the blues?
Brown grass dead waving limp by the acre,
another tan pup auto-mobiled to its maker:
chase down the devil while you're lookin' for clues,
the heat from the flames taints the colour of the blues.
Warm flat beer in a rim-cracked glass,
reach in your pocket feel the hairs on yo' ass:
find a sweated dollar in the better of your shoes;
order seven whiskies as a cure for the blues.
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Ewan, this so deserves to be
Ewan, this so deserves to be set to music. I'm sure Tom would enjoy singing it too. The only problem I see with it is there are not enough verses. Still, fantastic imagery.
I'd kill to see Tom too.
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The imagery is very good, I
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The imagery is very good, I agree. The first stanza is brilliant.
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