Home Alone
By nicola6
Wed, 30 Jul 2008
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5 comments
The great ghosts of recent history
Hang around the house
Icing up the icebox
Peeling the paint
Glasses get cracked
Tea cups stain
Shampoo goes missing
The lamps perform a pantomime
Of flicker
The rugs recede
Pictures that were perfectly
Aligned
Tilt to the right
Cushions that were plump
Pucker
I linger on the middle landing
Look up the dark stair
Look down the dark stair
The banister bending
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Spooky. Lots of nice stuff
Spooky. Lots of nice stuff in here; liked the alliteration
'rugs recede' 'plump pucker' etc...
'The lamps perform a pantomime of flicker' was especially good.
Most enjoyable poem.
regards
Ewan
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I think it's a very good
Permalink Submitted by onemorething on
I think it's a very good poem too and can't say anymore than Ewan really, but I have read it a couple of times as I liked it very much.
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Excellent poem. Enjoyed it a
Permalink Submitted by luigi_pagano on
Excellent poem. Enjoyed it a lot.
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