Vacation
By nicola6
Thu, 16 Oct 2008
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In Maine the roads ran from
Highway to local to track
You, me and your son
Looking for the elusive moose
Before the sun slipped into the
Tall trees
The boxy car we left
At the edge of the cemetery
A rebuke to the aloof
Our tread a song of summer
Dry and hard
Insects charging
There and there
A shadow
Moose moving
I caught your eye
Concocting a story
To be offered at show and tell
The three of us
Creeping the backwoods
At the edge of America where
I passed your boy a stick
To thrash the dry grasses
Took a picture to remember
The game getting the better of us.
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A splendid poem, Nicola.
Permalink Submitted by Silver Spun Sand on
A splendid poem, Nicola. Evocative and full of atmosphere.
"I caught your eye
Concocting a story
To be offered at show and tell"
Admired these lines especially.
Tina
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I liked the feel of the
Permalink Submitted by kim.rooney on
I liked the feel of the undercurrent, riding the understatement;
'The three of us
Creeping the backwoods'
Mmmm, my kind of poem...
Kim Rooney
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