Sunsets
By littleditty
Mon, 17 Nov 2008
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Do you know how beautiful you are to me?
You knock the spots off any simile.
For you there are none - you are the sea,
the pitch, the fixed twinkle map, a pitcher
of shooting lasers pointing direction lightly.
Sunsets have written your name
in inky clouds your shape; and I am your page,
a colour wheel watermark running through veins.
If I am to be, it is of you, an almanac
of words and moving picture.
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This is a beautiful love
Permalink Submitted by MistakenMagic on
This is a beautiful love poem ld. I absolutely adored the second stanza and all the imagery was equally strong :)An excellent poem!
Magic xxx
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I can only echo what has
Permalink Submitted by Silver Spun Sand on
I can only echo what has already been said. I loved every word, ld.
Tina :-)x
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I love the line 'colour
Permalink Submitted by hilary west on
I love the line 'colour wheel watermark running through veins'. Very effective.
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