Sorry Daddy

By Yazmin

Thu, 02 Oct 2008

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Daddy said I was bad
Said i got what I earned
Claimed I drove him mad
Said I'd better have learned

Mum said that i cant tell
That he'll get into trouble
Said that daddy's unwell
Sent off on the double

Nurse said I cant go back
I have to live in a 'Home'
I'd die with one more smack
I've never felt so alone

Daddy died cuz of this
Suicide in a lorry
Home, I dont think I'll miss
But daddy I am so sorry

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Yes,it's a brave piece of

Permalink Submitted by tamara on Fri, 2008-10-03 00:30

Yes,it's a brave piece of writing,well done.x

Oh if this is true, which I

Permalink Submitted by yrene on Tue, 2009-01-06 04:48

Oh if this is true, which I think it is.. I'm so sorry. You wrote it very well. It's sad and I can almost relate to it.

(^_^)
best regards,
yReNe

Oh no no no this is not true

Permalink Submitted by Yazmin on Mon, 2009-02-23 19:45

Oh no no no this is not true at all, my real dad died when I was three and my step dad didnt do this, I just read a book that inspired me Thank you :)

Yaz