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I really like this! The irony of the stanzas captured me. There is peace, while humanity passed by. There is peace, but there are guns and suicide bombers....They're my favorite parts of the poem. Oh and MistakenMagic is definitely right, the last stanza is haunting. It has a huge truth in it! best regards, yReNe

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This is a gem, Val. But ...

Permalink Submitted by Silver Spun Sand on Thu, 2009-01-08 21:28

This is a gem, Val. But ... oh, that words such as these would not need to be written; beautiful, poignant, and unfortunately true, as they are. Much love, Tina xx

Brilliant! Captures the

Permalink Submitted by threeleafshamrock on Fri, 2009-01-09 01:39

Brilliant! Captures the anger hopelessness and disregard for life. Very powerful and moving, thought provoking and unfortunately true. Chris

Thanks everyone for all the

Permalink Submitted by Bradene on Sat, 2009-01-10 10:20

Thanks everyone for all the nice things said. Much appreciated. Val x

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I agree with Nathan and the

I agree... and I agree

Thanks to all three of you

I really like this! The

This is a gem, Val. But ...

Brilliant! Captures the

Thanks everyone for all the

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