Disappearing trick.

By chuck

Thu, 26 Feb 2009
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9 comments
 

Words coming out one by one,
The poem's over before it's begun.

Certificate U
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Comments

Submitted by Silver Spun Sand on
Now that's what I call short and sweet:-) Succinct - most certainly. Tina

 

Submitted by chuck on
Thanks Tina. Poetry isn't really my strong suit.

Submitted by Belle Green on
It's very difficult to write a short poem like this that actually leaves an impression, but you've done it here so well. Nice job.

Submitted by chuck on
Thank you Belle Green. Just one of those off-the-cuff things you know. I actually deleted it the first time because I thought it was daft.

Submitted by Crackersville on
Acute observation number 3! ;)

 

Submitted by chuck on
Thanks Crack. I seem to be blessed with an inexhaustible supply of acute observations. Oops there goes another one.

Submitted by Crackersville on
Do me a favour friend, don't call me Crack. I hate it. Call me Cracker/s. Please.

 

Submitted by chuck on
Right you are Cracker/s. I'll try to remember.

Submitted by jecas35 on
Nice