Waiting For A Change
By Dynamaso
Tue, 24 Mar 2009
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Summer is packing bags
with stockpiled memories
of lazy beach days;
of salty kisses and sunburn hugs;
of balmy, barbecued nights
doing the mosquito-slap dance
on friend-filled balconies;
of cotton-sheeted dreams
and cool-change smiles.
“Winter won’t be long,”
say my fickle feathered friends,
who’ll leave their homes
hanging in autumn-bare trees;
unintentionally cruel reminders
of avian, volitant freedom;
of long ago yesterdays
when summers stretched
tall shadows on a small boy.
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Smashing, loved
Permalink Submitted by lenchenelf on
Smashing, loved 'mosquito-slap dance
on friend-filled balconies' begs to be read aloud.:-)atb L
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dripping with that delicious
dripping with that delicious end of summer satiety. loved it, transported me from the so very present spring here.
sorry winter stalks you, but thanks for a sweet reminder of what we have in store ;)
ax
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This is SUPERB! Brilliant,
Permalink Submitted by MistakenMagic on
This is SUPERB! Brilliant, brilliant imagery - love the last line! Well done!
Magic xxx
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Agree with all that Magic
Permalink Submitted by threeleafshamrock on
Agree with all that Magic said; the last line alone is a beaut. Brought back memories, not just of summers but of youth and all the good bits in between. Nice one mate and a well deserved cherry; brilliant!
Chris ;)
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It's all been said. A much
Permalink Submitted by Silver Spun Sand on
It's all been said. A much savoured poem. Thank you:-)
Tina
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"tall shadows on a small
"tall shadows on a small boy"... lovely! thanks for retrieving memories of yesterdays from the closet in basement
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