First Impressions I.P.

By threeleafshamrock

Tue, 31 Mar 2009

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5 comments

She broke the silence with a smile,
that waned at my surprise.
I answered; too late!
The lack of instinctive reaction
not lost in unfamiliarity.
She had needed;
expected more!

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Comments

thirty words very well

Permalink Submitted by a.jay on Tue, 2009-03-31 19:44

thirty words very well spent. enjoyed this a lot mr.shamrock. ax

Yet another great short,

Permalink Submitted by Dynamaso on Wed, 2009-04-01 04:31

Yet another great short, sharp piece. This week's IP is really bringing 'em out. Excellent, mate.

Short, sharp and good, well

Permalink Submitted by jennifer on Wed, 2009-04-01 11:41

Short, sharp and good, well done! J x

I agree with everyone else -

Permalink Submitted by MistakenMagic on Wed, 2009-04-01 20:40

I agree with everyone else - love this week's IP ;) Well done on another good 'un Chris! Magic xxx

Thanks guys; trying to catch

Permalink Submitted by threeleafshamrock on Sun, 2009-04-12 14:02

Thanks guys; trying to catch up on all your work and comments.