Some Enchanted Evening
By Silver Spun Sand
Thu, 02 Apr 2009
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Sounds crass, but truly I did
catch sight of her across a crowded room –
a posh cocktail affair. Her dress, backless –
one of those little black numbers.
She seemed different from the rest.
As one does, I mingle, but it’s not
my scene. Hooray-Henries most of them.
Next thing I know she’s standing beside me –
long brown hair; her eyes a matching
shade of tawny.
“Like another drink?” I ask,
pointing to her glass.
“Mais, oui!” she responds.
I swallow, hard – attempt to nod convincingly,
as if I understand her every word.
Her name was Collette – from Paris.
Whatever else she said, I hadn’t a clue.
The most I could do was to smile back …
in my best French accent.
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This poem is very passionate
This poem is very passionate in its simplicity. I love the straightfowardness of it, and the potential of the narrator and collette.
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A lovely glimpse into a
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A lovely glimpse into a magical evening! I think the honesty of the narrator works really well her an again, you have a talent for perfect endings ;)
Magic xxx
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long brown hair, with eyes a
long brown hair, with eyes a matching
shade of tawny----------- That's brilliant I never thought of eyes as tawny...
I saw the film South Pacific at Odean Leicester Square about 1960/61 at a guess...... still got the brochure in the attic I think.
Steve
SteveM
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Hi Tina, keep them coming. I
Hi Tina, keep them coming. I think short stories are much easier to write than poetry.
And yes it was Todd AO 70mm. I only ever saw the film just once, but recall the various lighting and colour effects. The idea was that whenever a song was out of context with the story they changed the view into a dreamlike sequence... similar to several numbers in West Side Story.
SteveM
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