Les Chansons d'Amour
By capoeiragem
Sat, 04 Apr 2009
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We tip-toed through the shadow
of yesterday's morning,
with scars, only visible
in the glare of certain lights,
underneath the skin.
We turned our faces into syllables
and counted out the beats,
watched the wolfram thread its signal
round the four walls of the room,
and played a game to see which one of us
could sit and stay quiet the loudest.
She said she couldn't read my smile,
it wasn't written on my face.
We closed our eyes.
We made love.
We listened to Death from Above.
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So many wonderful lines in
Permalink Submitted by MistakenMagic on
So many wonderful lines in this piece! I just love:
'We turned our faces into syllables
and counted out the beats,'
and
'and played a game to see which one of us
could sit and stay quiet the loudest.'
AND
'She said she couldn't read my smile,
it wasn't written on my face.'
This is brilliant. Well done.
Magic xxx
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As cool as Lounge, Bossa
As cool as Lounge, Bossa Nova, and caipirinha, not a wasted word.
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Ditto Magic's comment - she
Ditto Magic's comment - she has highlighted all my favourite lines!
Superb poem!
J x
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