For you again, this morning.
By Gilbert
Wed, 22 Apr 2009
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In the ghosts of
Sunday morning,
she will meet you
at the river
and you`ll watch
the mists dissolving
in honey coloured sunshine
and you have so much
to tell her,
but the silence
gathers round you
while only seagulls answer
the sound of her heartbeat
in your mind.
Though you know
she`ll always be here,
St Therese of the dockyards,
waiting for your coming
among the half truths
and the litter,
the tug boats
and the driftwood,
still you never touch her.
You just listen
with your eyes,
till you watch her fade
so slowly
into another penance
of your mind.
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Lovely piece; reminds me of
Permalink Submitted by threeleafshamrock on
Lovely piece; reminds me of Leonard Cohen's 'Suzanne'. Well worth the cherry, congrats.
Chris ;)
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This poem is good. "Among
Permalink Submitted by Richard L. Prov... on
This poem is good. "Among the half truths" is a nice example of your reach. Richard LP
Richard L. Provencher
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This is lovely."The silence
Permalink Submitted by sarah wilson on
This is lovely."The silence gathers round you" got to me. Congrats. Sarah
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'Suzanne takes you down to
Permalink Submitted by Silver Spun Sand on
'Suzanne takes you down
to her place on the river,
you can hear the boats go by
you can spend the night beside her.
And you know she's half crazy.'
You inspired me to to dash and find the sheet music I have for this strangely evocative song. And trying to sing along. I think I'll just stick with the keyboard;-)
And your beautiful poem compliments it, more than. Congrats on the well-deserved cherry and the p.o.w.
T.
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