The Paradox of His Detachment Stirred Her Curiosity

Cherry

By sunshine

Fri, 08 May 2009
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He wanted to make clear
His indifference to her

He left her a message wrapped in snow
“Reply if you wish; ignore if you wish”

He left a footprint in a box
Hidden in the shadow of her house

She carved question marks on all the trees
And wrote her name on all the leaves

She tried to understand

He was trying to forget

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Miscellany
Love

Comments

Submitted by Dynamaso on
A great little piece this, Sunshine. I really like it a lot. I particularly like: "She carved question marks on all the trees, And wrote her name on all the leaves" Isn't it always the way - as soon as the man loses interest, the women wants to know him better.

 

Submitted by sunshine on
thanks Dynamaso. And we're so often left with questions unanswered. Margot

Submitted by nicola6 on
Great writing - concise with an elegant poignancy.

 

Submitted by sunshine on
many thanks Nicola

Submitted by davidazed on
Excellent

Submitted by sunshine on
Thanks. Good to have something to aspire to - I'll keep my L plates on until I can match the quality of the quoted words!