Empty

Cherry

By threeleafshamrock

Wed, 15 Jul 2009
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10 comments
 

Endless days; empty!
Unvaried routines;
rising, realizing,
dusting, staring
at photo-spattered walls
and empty chairs,
where once their feet
did not reach the floor.

Certificate U
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Comments

Submitted by russiandoll on
Like this :) A great babysitter could emerge from this piece ;)

 

Submitted by threeleafshamrock on
Haha! good thinking doll, might even make money; hmm maybe things aren't so bad after all lol. Thanks for reading. Chris ;)

Submitted by sarah wilson on
So full of angst Chris. I Like it too:) sarah x

Submitted by threeleafshamrock on
Wow a cherry; I seem to get cherries for the pieces that I don't expect them for lol. Thanks all the same; chuffed!

Submitted by threeleafshamrock on
Thanks Sarah; looks like the serious stuff works LOL. ;)

Submitted by whiskey on
I've never had kids, but I can imagine what it must be like when they fly the nest. Cleverly and succinctly done, Chris. :-)

Submitted by threeleafshamrock on
Thanks Jameson ;)

Submitted by threeleafshamrock on
Jeez, sorry whiskey; how's that for a Freudian slip lol ...honest mistake; think I need to lie down for a while ;)

Submitted by whiskey on
LOL! I prefer a nice single malt meself.

Submitted by threeleafshamrock on
A double, whiskey; always a double - it saves getting up again so soon and eventually it saves getting up at all ;)