Dead Men Talk, Part 1

Wow; some start - I take it there will be a part2 etc. - can't wait to see where this is going. This seems to stand up on its own, if leaving us wondering (imagining) why she hated and feared her father. Chris ;)

I really enjoyed reading it - liked the way you kept me guessing. I didn't quite understand why she thought they'd made a mistake, but that's probably me being braindead. I'd definitely like to read part two!

Me too:)

Good start. Now onto part two. (Not sure about the bones removed from her legs bit)