A Whitby Notable
By Ewan
Fri, 24 Jul 2009
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I am the most well-known count,
of infamy I've no small amount;
my presence is sensed on Whitby beach:
no place beyond my odourous reach.
Beside the Penny Waterfall - on the promenade -
you'll find me loitering, and frying lard.
Who is that Transylvanian imposter?
I am more famous, two fish will cost a
pound with a poke, but not from Dracula:
yes, it is I, the evil Count Spatula.
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Now that's scary. Why not
Now that's scary. Why not drop 'if you' in line 6 and get rid of the awkward surplus syllables?
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Yes 'really' is the
Yes 'really' is the stumbling block. On the other hand 'if you look hard' doesn't seem quite right either. I will give it some thought and get back to you.
Ah, I see you got rid of 'really' while I was posting.
'If you all look hard'?
'Frying lard' works.
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Yes well skunk's are people
Yes well skunk's are people too of course. I think I'm in enough trouble for one day.
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Too late. You will have to
Too late. You will have to answer to the Crackersville Literary Committee for that.
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dum-de-dumdum,
Permalink Submitted by threeleafshamrock on
dum-de-dumdum, dum-de-dum-de-dum....
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Lol! I love it, Ewan. Thanks
Lol! I love it, Ewan. Thanks for the laugh. :-)
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Chortled, chuckled and
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Chortled, chuckled and chuntered :-0) atb Lena
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Really made me laugh -
Permalink Submitted by sarah wilson on
Really made me laugh - thanks:)
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