crash my brain.
By kristen-ann
Wed, 17 Jun 2009
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crash my brain.
and burn my dreams.
you throw me out.
into the broken street.
attack me so.
to leave these marks.
across my throat.
and jealousy.
it's just a factor.
in this horrible matter.
do you see what you do.
when you do this to me.
it's like a disese.
back and back and back again.
i will go.
it drives me crazy.
to almost insanity.
i've lost it all.
i need someone.
to make me sane again.
gone up the wall.
and around the bend.
over and over again.
i've lost my will.
you can now see everything you've done to me.
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i like the feel of this
Permalink Submitted by Curse of 222 on
i like the feel of this piece. the flow gets interrupted, though, by the periods at the end of every line.
good work. keep it up.
jason
jason
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