3am
By Verity Valentine
Wed, 19 Aug 2009
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There is no sound,
How blindingly obvious.
Dark, shielded gloom,
Illuminates the room.
It's pouring rain inside my mind,
But stardust highlights the skies features of
the pleasant kind.
A comfy pillow, of common scent,
Welcomingly following certain dreams.
Some may say my life is perfect,
An overused title, to what all it seems.
I concentrate on my emotions,
So much that they take over me,
They make my decisions for me,
There is none of me left to kill.
It's 3am and I'm lying in a sack,
A discarded heart, drenched in sin.
What is to happen to me now, I shall leave at God's will.
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Sad however very
Sad however very beautiful.
Love these lines;
"There is no sound,
How blindingly obvious."
and
"It's pouring rain inside my mind,
But stardust highlights the skies features of
the plesant kind."
Well done :)
Beeme xx
k.
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