Can you smell the jasmine blossom?
By Beeme
Mon, 26 Oct 2009
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Can you smell the jasmine blossom?
Feel its baby pink freckles taunting us.
Me and you.
Our feet wrapped up in brown paper.
Fragile and new.
Look upwards the sky is bending to greet us,
dreams flying high with the kites.
Free apart from me,
balancing the weight of your feet
with mine, tipped towards gravity.
The apple sliding from your mouth
with my hands cupped ready to catch.
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'Our feet wrapped up in
Permalink Submitted by MistakenMagic on
'Our feet wrapped up in brown paper.
Fragile and new.'
-absolutely adore this image Beeme! And the final two lines remind me of the cafeteria scene in 'Twilight' when Edward catches Bella's apple - I'm such a fan girl hehe well done on this one!
Magic xxx
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Well done on the cherry,
Permalink Submitted by MistakenMagic on
Well done on the cherry, Beeme!
Magic xxx
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I completely missed this
Permalink Submitted by Silver Spun Sand on
I completely missed this one, Beeme. It is a little gem and well worthy of its cherry.
Tina x
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This is excellent Beeme.
Permalink Submitted by sarah wilson on
This is excellent Beeme. Love the brown paper wrapped feet! Congrats to you xx
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New Beeme Hi! Many
Permalink Submitted by Cavalcader on
New Beeme
Hi! Many congratulations
on the cherry I keep looking and looking
for you just seen. This is perfect.
I remember reading it but
excuse me wasn't quite sure
how about to ask about the apple.
was it cupid.Nearly well Ray and I
had damn virus.3 weeks.This is
beautifully done lovely poem.
well deserved cherry
hope all is going well.
Last night back on here 5 hours
longest computer some how gone
backwards buttons capitals took
me twice as long till switched off
and started again
love julie xx cavalcader (;-
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