Evan

By lyssagurl_l0l

Sat, 05 Dec 2009
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His eyes like magic
His name, a song
His hair, a wonder
Like snowfall in mid-summer

The small tingling
As he strokes my cheek
Gazing deep into my pupils,
i can't help this feeling

It feels right
To be with him
The love i feel
from deep within

The moonlight shows
A state of beauty
As the wind makes a breeze,
Making you shake

Do you know
Of the beautiful pictures
I see you in
Each night?

But with all this
I still don't know
do i love you
Or is my mind lying?

Certificate U
Love
Love

Comments

Submitted by Curse of 222 on
"Do you know Of the beautiful pictures I see you in Each night?" --now that is a poetry line! this piece is a definite step up from 'E or J'. good job jason

jason

Submitted by lyssagurl_l0l on
thank you very much, jason. yes, i liked this one a lot more too. thank you for the comment! ~:)alyssa(:~

~:)alyssa(:~