(An aside)
By littleditty
Wed, 13 Jan 2010
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(Stepping out through gardens,
Mountains, rivers, oceans,
She sees gods and goddesses
Going about their everyday affairs;
Somedays, they say hello, and
Somedays, she'll watch from a bench,
Believing they can't see her there
Pondering how she is often like him,
How much she is so like her,
And how she has never been.)
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Just brilliant ld! Brackets
Permalink Submitted by MistakenMagic on
Just brilliant ld! Brackets seem to be all the rage in the poetry I'm reading (and writing) at the moment - and your poem works so well. Those last three lines just blew me away ;)
Magic xxx
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Very deep, very short, very
Permalink Submitted by threeleafshamrock on
Very deep, very short, very good; that last line is a killer; love it ;)
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new littleditty like this
Permalink Submitted by Cavalcader on
new littleditty
like this very much,Goddesses
lovely. I am thinking to Mermaids.
well done.
julie x
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