You, again..

By maddie4848

Sat, 06 Feb 2010
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Silence of the phone stretches to weeks;
you always fading, moving backwards, dimmed.
I do & don't care, watching my wanting;
you're in my head, hopeless;
your presence had me fixed, focused;
some misguided arrow,
blind besotted beam.
Time lengthens without you;
I remember that night -
suddenly holding your hand..
the happiest I'd been,
simply long time.

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Submitted by Cavalcader on
new maddie-4848 hello! very well described. I know how you feel.Same once in my younger years.Hope,hand,laugh,smile. Memories have strange effects and good. Don't you think.Always if only. then one thinks would it have worked out.Then thoughts change into bright stars after years go by. julie x cavalcader (:-

Submitted by maddie4848 on
yes true!! thanks.. and maybe a good thing it didn't work out....painful at the time, but all grist for the mill...