Body
By maggyvaneijk
Mon, 05 Apr 2010
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I look at you
I love every part of you
I touch your nose, your eyes, your elbows, your knees
I hold your hand in my hand and I stroke your fingers
I run my finger tips along your veins
And then I get really scared -
I see those veins, bright blue veins creeping along the surface
It terrifies me because they tell me we’re just human
You’re just a body
And a body is vulnerable as hell
Anything can happen to a body
It will break. It will stop existing
And I sink back into my pillow
You ask me if I’m okay
I lie and say yes
I wipe away a tear.
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'You’re just a body And a
Permalink Submitted by MistakenMagic on
'You’re just a body
And a body is vulnerable as hell
Anything can happen to a body
It will break. It will stop existing'
- so tragically true. I love the brutal yet beautiful honesty in this piece. A wonderful poem and well-deserving of a cherry!
Magic xxx
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yes, I enjoyed this too!
Permalink Submitted by Insertponceyfre... on
yes, I enjoyed this too!
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The older I get, the more I
The older I get, the more I feel exactly as you've described here. Lovely work...
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I recognise this feeling,
I recognise this feeling, but you put into words so eloquently, lovely writing.
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thats just brilliant really,
Permalink Submitted by ArticulateO on
thats just brilliant really, so simple but so strong!
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This reminded me of watching
This reminded me of watching my son fighting for life in an incubator. I know that wasn't your intention, for it to lead in that direction, but it did. Absolutely beautiful.
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