Secrets

By threeleafshamrock

Sat, 15 May 2010
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3 comments
 

You smiled wanly, through tears,
knife poised
but uncut onions,
do not make
one cry....

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Comments

Submitted by Beeme on
very touching and sad, nearly made me cry. Beeme xx

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Submitted by shoe on
There is so much unsaid that somehow gets through these few words. poised writing.

 

Submitted by maggyvaneijk on
a short and delicate piece and yet like the above commentators I feel like so much was said with so little words