Your breath on my neck
By andrew-evans
Sun, 13 Jun 2010
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The glow of the tv
on your back
and in your eyes,
the softness of your top
and the curve of your waist,
your hand, fingers entwined with mine,
every single moment of the night
was purely and simply, divine,
but in one moment all my dreams came true,
as you began to fall asleep,
your eyelids began to feel heavy
and your heartrate start to slow,
your breath on my neck
was all I needed to know
that everything I ever wanted
was laying in my arms.
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I think this is lovely. So
Permalink Submitted by Margharita on
I think this is lovely. So quiet, but so intense. You have real talent.
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I really like it too! One
Permalink Submitted by Insertponceyfre... on
I really like it too! One typo: I think it's entwined, but perhaps you should google it just to check
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