Look All You Want
By Dynamaso
Tue, 29 Jun 2010
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I’ve no wool to pull
Over your eyes
There’s no secrets to hide
Or faults to disguise
I’ve not any regrets
Of which I won’t speak
I’m empty, devoid
Of the darkness you seek
Open my cupboard
Check under my bed
There’s no skeletons there
Nor in my attic or shed
My past is not littered
With grim indiscretions
Nor is it tainted
With buried obsessions
I’m as you see me
Not pure yet used well
Look all you want
But there is nothing to tell
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Lovely rhythm in this one,
Permalink Submitted by MistakenMagic on
Lovely rhythm in this one, Mark and a great play on old sayings, especially:
'Open my cupboard
Check under my bed
There’s no skeletons there
Nor in my attic or shed'
Magic xxx
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A really good flow to this
A really good flow to this one Mark, as Magic said - great play on old sayings. I wish it could have been longer. Keep them coming. Steve
SteveM
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