A Promise

By WillSimpson

Thu, 08 Jul 2010
  • 1953 reads
8 comments
 

For you I hold an unknown world,
A place behind, the sands of time,
For life and love,
A song,
A smile,
An angel holding a sweet child,

Primrose summers,
Swings on a park,
Unknown people,
Friends we have made,

Times we have forgotten,
Times we have enjoyed,
Flying like a storm,
Listening to pink floyd,

My rythm has passed, but the words still flow,
A hundred miles we journeyed,
A hundred days more,

I felt it, the rush through my hair,
Stood up on end, like eddy monster,
Over and over again,

Dreaming of seeds
Fields of green
Wild strawberries,
Wild hair, electric blue,
Twisting fingers perfect for running through,
Tingling now as I'm slowing down,

Heart beat loosing pace,
Still unknown to me,
Alas
I haven't even seen your face

Certificate U
Poem
The last days
Miscellaneous

Comments

Submitted by Kahdai on
Wow Will I love this poem! 'Flying like a storm, Listening to pink floyd, My rythm has passed, but the words still flow, A hundred miles we journeyed, A hundred days more, I felt it, the rush through my hair,' I haven't even seen your face Ah its exciting & little sad. :) x

"I will make sense with a few reads \^^/ "

Submitted by WillSimpson on
Damn it, I tried not to make it sad at all, I thought it was happy :( Lol oh well, best try my happy genre attempt again.

Until we feel our thoughts our thinking remains unfelt

Submitted by Kahdai on
It was except the end line :)

"I will make sense with a few reads \^^/ "

Submitted by Kahdai on
eddy monster?

"I will make sense with a few reads \^^/ "

Submitted by WillSimpson on
haha eddy monster, wiki pedia the little freak, he's great. When i was a kid my mam used to brush my hair in a wierd way, but I had little pointy ears and someone said I looked like eddy monster(they regretted it later haha) x

Until we feel our thoughts our thinking remains unfelt

Submitted by Kahdai on
:D haha ok I get it(& no you dont!)! k x

"I will make sense with a few reads \^^/ "

Submitted by WillSimpson on
It should be Eddie Munster,

Until we feel our thoughts our thinking remains unfelt

Submitted by Kahdai on
'Wild strawberries,' play the strawberries? 'Wild hair, electric blue,' sounds like my picture Jungleblu http://stonedragon317.deviantart.com/gallery/#_browse

"I will make sense with a few reads \^^/ "