Angels

By darkoe2lh2k

Thu, 29 Jul 2010
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whenever you feel lonely
whenever you feel down
close your eyes and just imagine
thats angels are around
try focuse on the good times
and eliminate the bad
you'll smile and then be happy
inside you wont feel sad
the warmth will then surround you
and protect you from inside
and all your troubles will be gone
at least for a little while
so whenever you feel lonely
just remeber what to do
angels are around you
and always watching you

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Submitted by skinner_jennifer on
Hi Darkoe2lh2k, Love this poem, totally the way I feel. This poem made me smile. Love Jenny.

 

Submitted by darkoe2lh2k on
thanks jen i love angels

Darko

Submitted by maggyvaneijk on
beautiful and sweet, a poem that puts a smile on your face

 

Submitted by darkoe2lh2k on
thank you for your nice comment :)

Darko

Submitted by kuno-chan on
I loved the poem. I just have one thought... or question maybe. Is there a reason you say the warmth will then will surround you? Is there a reason you put will in there twice? But other than that I really enjoyed it. ----Kuno-Chan----

----Kuno-Chan----

Submitted by darkoe2lh2k on
oops so your right only meant one to be in there thanks will correct it

Darko