Burnt poems

By Kahdai

Wed, 21 Jul 2010
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Sandy feet,
toes touched,
bonfire warms,
lack of regret,
smoke in my hair.
Music in our heads,
lyrics up in flames,
dare I ask what next,
I usually be more patient,
you must have hidden magic.

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Submitted by darkenwolf on
i like it- short but sweet, it says all it needs too. good work

Submitted by Kahdai on
thankyou very much fenrir ;) K

"I will make sense with a few reads \^^/ "

Submitted by darkenwolf on
you are most very welcome - fenrir 2 ;>

Submitted by Kahdai on
;)

"I will make sense with a few reads \^^/ "