Driftwood
By Louise178
Fri, 06 Aug 2010
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Rough, rugged driftwood
covered with grit and slime,
pierce not my soft white skin
with splintered fingers drawn,
as I reach with gentle hands
to place against my castle wall,
for you are real,
the precise material,
to bring alive
my splendid castle,
a gateway, for the crabs
the tiny fish,
my prize treasure
the envy of all the other kids,
who gape in awe,
at my castle
with it's proper
wooden drawbridge.
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I liked this - I found a
I liked this - I found a tension as I read, trying to make out where it was going, perhaps an enchanted castle or a wooden talisman. My mind was spinning and the ending was quite a relief! Nice one :o)
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wow this is lovely,
wow this is lovely, imagination and detial Louise!
"I will make sense with a few reads \^^/ "
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