Lucky Lottery

Cherry

By gouri_guha

Thu, 19 Aug 2010
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He halted at the tea stall and ordered a cup of garma garam Chai. The lottery ticket fell out of his shirt pocket as he fished out the money to pay. He picked up the newspaper and searched the number of the lucky winner. A sound of joy breaks out, the biker starts and accelerates to grab his waiting luck.

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Submitted by tcook on
Hi Gouri - great to see you back! I like this very much but I think it would be better if you took out the 'for' in the first line. It gives you another word too!

Submitted by gouri_guha on
Tony, thanks for pointing out and the cherry. Gouri