Don't let me fool you

Cherry

By Louise178

Sat, 21 Aug 2010
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11 comments
 

In this world
I fly solo
if you seek love
don't let me fool you
all I crave
is self-gratification
my hunger is greater
than your infatuation
my eyes are
drama queens
my words
con artists
hands though gentle
demand your virtue
if you seek love
don't let me fool you
for in this world
I fly solo

Certificate U
Poems
Fantasy

Comments

Submitted by russiandoll on
Conjures up all sorts of stories of ruthlessness, hurt and agenda... I like!

 

Submitted by Louise178 on
Thank you russiandoll, I am glad you liked it.

Louise

Submitted by Insertponceyfre... on
I like this too - simple but effective

 

Submitted by Louise178 on
Thank you.

Louise

Submitted by Louise178 on
and thank you for the cherry :)

Louise

Submitted by Beeme on
I really enjoyed, well done on the cherry :) Beeme xx

k.

Submitted by Louise178 on
Thank you Beeme x

Louise

Submitted by darkenwolf on
very sharp, the words and the sentiment well done. ;)

Submitted by Louise178 on
Thank you :)

Louise

Submitted by RachelPatricia on
Love this, Louise. 'my eyes are drama queens my words con artists' My favourite lines :) Well done on the cherry, Rachel xx

Submitted by Louise178 on
Thank you Rachel x

Louise