Spring

Cherry

By Sophie-Stokes

Sat, 28 Aug 2010
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Winter fades
Bloom in Sunshine
A new technicolour
defeats winter's dullness.
A selection of perfumes
fills the fields of green.
As the dew rises
the mirage approaches,
A new dream is painted
into reality,
once more.

(9/4/08)

Certificate U
Poem
Autobiography

Comments

Submitted by Sophie-Stokes on
I'm writing out all of my poems that I have been collecting for a couple of years, so I hope you'll see a progression in my writing style as I improve. Please feel free to give your analysis and feedback. Hope you enjoy :)

Submitted by celticman on
Not got any suggestions, but I do like it.