Buildings
By Louise178
Mon, 27 Sep 2010
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I know you still live next door
though there is rubble, litter strewn
an empty space, the place
has been blitzed bombed
but I know you are there
waiting listening wanting
for what I am not sure
Memories have sunk
into very foundations
of a building built
brick upon brick
word upon word
laboured long lovingly
by hands of fate
that scratched hours
times dates on magnolia
wooden doors brass handles
Now there are no walls
to hang a picture
but underground structure
a solid unyielding base
faithfulness that was you
I know you still live there
why I am not sure...
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Fab and fab - love the
Fab and fab - love the haunting of memory - the imprint we leave on the bricks and mortar of the places we inhabit. Feels like the opening to Rebecca - wonderful middle stanza. Well done Louise. :-)
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