Comfort Angel
By Kahdai
Sun, 03 Oct 2010
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Space swirls in my eyelids
above my misty lake below,
no lake is too deep like a
bridge over, reached me up
into your cool, dim lights
where a quiet, gentle song
cradles me in into safety.
Ghosts try to snatch me in
back under the water yet I
am safe in you arms, under
your wings now in feathery
comfort hold my head in to
soft chest hair curls over
caress all over I feel new
Rained on by willows tears
tired body sinking in sand
my comfert angel leans and
gives me a spiced loving x
I can only stare in wonder
soft beautiful wide eyes I
know are full of my pains.
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Hi Kahdai, How wonderful
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Hi Kahdai,
How wonderful this poem is, I love the lines I am safe in
your arms, under your wings in feathery comfort hold my
head in to soft chet hair curls.
Simply beautiful.
Jenny.
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Hi Kahdai- you might want to
Hi Kahdai- you might want to write 'space swirls behind my eyelids'- makes more sense methinks. Is easily a beautiful poem. Very moving!
pia;)
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If it's a draft then you can
If it's a draft then you can do whatever you like with it
;) pia
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It is still very
It is still very moving-filled with love and emotion well done ;)
pia xx
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