Honestly

By Kahdai

Thu, 14 Oct 2010
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4 comments
 

Maybe I am, afraid
of, of most people
in some small ways
why I need to talk
look at your faces
and you hear words
that I do not mean

It's never what I meant
what I mean to say is I
well, I do not know how
how to say it... can we
start again ask me same
same question in others
other words explains it

Certificate U
Miscellaneous

Comments

Submitted by skinner_jennifer on
Hi Kahdai, is this a poem, of regret of saying the wrong thing, then wishing to put it right by starting again? I think we have all put our foot in it at some point in our lives wishing we hadn't said what we said. I hope I got the right idea with this one. Jenny.

 

Submitted by shoe on
I like the stop/start dialogue, I feel it needs clarifying a little, a few tweaks and this would be better than good.

 

Submitted by Highhat on
I liked it too. The hesitation and the problem about making things clear to each other without misunderstanding? Well done ;)Pia

Submitted by Kahdai on
Yeah I do a lot thankyou all x

"I will make sense with a few reads \^^/ "