Walled Garden
By lenchenelf
Mon, 06 Sep 2010
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If I close sight, let the run of my tongue
excavate dimpled braille of a peach stone,
flesh is soon forgotten in another wonder.
Trial and error may reveal hidden glyph,
would I con its meaning, let the miner speak
a tale of patterns, known to fruitflies;
how some memories persist.
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you have a great eye for
Permalink Submitted by maggyvaneijk on
you have a great eye for detail "dimpled braille of a peach stone", a very sensual poem to read.
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Yes I liked the braille
Yes I liked the braille image and the idea of hidden meanings in something so mundane that we can only guess at.
Rob
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Hello elf. At last catching
Hello elf.
At last catching up on some of your work.
I liked this little piece.
Ahh, bliss eating fruit with eyes closed, dreaming.
ps
Thanks for the Drosophila tip. I now know what's wrong with me.
ScoZen
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