Saw the stars go out (song)

By Kahdai

Mon, 15 Nov 2010
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When woke up this morning
sky still dark yet ii see
stars flicker off the sun
from over & under the sea
a frost lit up everything
sun doesnt warm me anyway
though you hours ago left
your side dreaming of you
and I am climbing back in

Certificate U
Poem
Me, you & my world
Love

Comments

Submitted by Highhat on
This is a lovely love poem Kahdai. ;)Pia

Submitted by skinner_jennifer on
I totally agree with Pia, the stars flicker off the sun, simply beautiful. Jenny.

 

Submitted by Kahdai on
Thanks both ^^ have anyone or you ever seen that? K x

"I will make sense with a few reads \^^/ "

Submitted by Highhat on
No I can't recall having seen that but you give a very good picture Pia ;)

Submitted by Kahdai on
thanks Pia dear :)

"I will make sense with a few reads \^^/ "

Submitted by skinner_jennifer on
No I have never seen the stars flicker off the sun either, but it sounds wonderful. Jenny.

 

Submitted by Kahdai on
Well, looks like it makes the stars flicker and go out, thats what I think anyway, and then the sky gets lighter K

"I will make sense with a few reads \^^/ "