song drafting

By Kahdai

Mon, 22 Nov 2010
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I listen so hard
dive down into
my night memory
how did the song go

not crusader
just an angel
trying to help
a bright colour
in a world o=df
otherwise grey
its ionly knid
if you set it free
guive time to heal

trying so hard to listen
time moving with 8 forces
I know I hear a fivth rthtyhem
I want to go and dance with them

Joy shares my dreams,
music should be free,
so make another copy,
of your home spun CD,
send it on as an mp3,
hear it from in a car
started sung from me.

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Submitted by Highhat on
This is almost a tune Kahdai. Very nice and easy ;)Pia

Submitted by Kahdai on
Thanks Pia, yes it is :)

"I will make sense with a few reads \^^/ "

Submitted by MistakenMagic on
'trying to help a bright coloure...' really love that line, kahdai! Lovely poem :) Magic xxx

 

Submitted by Kahdai on
Thanks Magic :D , glad you still have time to read ;) xxx

"I will make sense with a few reads \^^/ "