Truth and Lies
By Silver Spun Sand
Mon, 21 Feb 2011
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It was all so easy then.
Like that night we spent
up in the tree-house;
never before had the sky
seemed more like the sea,
rocking us to sleep.
Then, a woodlouse crept
onto your leg. I shone a torch...
cringing inside, making out
I didn’t mind. Brushed it aside;
bull-shitting you – a breeze
in them there days
and that peach-pink dawn...
the mewing of a buzzard
running rings around its mate,
and a heron, trawling
the blue; black-cloaked,
against a morning moon.
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This is beautiful Tina, Ah!
Permalink Submitted by skinner_jennifer on
This is beautiful Tina,
Ah! childhood memories of tree-house's and adventures, you bring it all back to me with this
poem.
Thankyou for the read.
Jenny.
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Love those two images in the
Permalink Submitted by MistakenMagic on
Love those two images in the final stanza, Tina. Especially the choice of the word 'mewing' - highly original! Well done :)
Magic xxx
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Just a beautiful little poem
Just a beautiful little poem with such vivid description Tina - I was there and then again just for the briefest of moments. :-)
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Loved the image evoked of
Loved the image evoked of the heron - very nice indeed.
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A charming snapshot and the
A charming snapshot and the images in the final stanza are beautiful.
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I agree with Shoe completely
I agree with Shoe completely , beautiful images and a lovely snap shot! I really love this one :)
Beeme xx
k.
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