If by Chance!

By skinner_jennifer

Sun, 15 May 2011
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The sweet taste of all his kisses...
is all you want they are your wishes,
why then do you yearn for more
when love comes knocking at your door?

those gentle feelings taking over
easier finding a four leaf clover,
teasing you with sensual pleasure
all your dreams...you two together,

but then by chance you find another,
you blend together two lovers forever,
around each corner somebody new
to leave...you think is wrong to do,

If you stayed you'd never know...
if loving him was the way to go,
for each new love don't be blind...
search for some peace of mind,

when real love you find...
you'll come together...your love to bind,
two souls finding love divine...
as they walk life's thin line.

Certificate 12
Poems
Love

Comments

Submitted by oldpesky on
Good morning Jennifer, nice little love poem you have here. Should we be happy with the love we have or is there a better love out there if we take the chance? It's an age old question.

Submitted by skinner_jennifer on
Thankyou so much oldpesky, this piece came to me in the early hours of the morning, the words just came into my head. Thanks for reading and the great comment. Jenny.

 

Submitted by Silver Spun Sand on
I really like this, Jenny, so very romantic. Just a tiny typo in the penultimate line, should be 'divine'. This one, my favourite stanza:- "those gentle feelings taking over easier finding a four leaf clover, teasing you with sensual pleasure all your dreams...you two together," Well done on this one Jenny;-) Tina

 

Submitted by skinner_jennifer on
Thankyou so much for your help Tina, where would I be without you? I'm very glad you liked this one, it's really kind of you to let me know, it makes all the difference when people give a comment, it really helps so thankyou again. Jenny.

 

Submitted by Highhat on
I think you did very well with the rhyme as well. Nice romantic poem ;)Pia

Submitted by V.C.Willow on
Sweet poem Jenny, I like the fact it can be seen as a bit philosophical as old pesky said about being content with what we have or deciding to seek out another better love but this is tempered with the light touch of the language and tone of the piece. It works on so many levels and this gives it such added depth and texture. V.C.

Submitted by skinner_jennifer on
Thankyou so much for reading Pia, you know your comments are always welcome. Jenny.

 

Submitted by skinner_jennifer on
Hi there V.C.Willow, It's a pleasure to read your comment on this piece, you have given me such a boost of confidence, which I really do appreciate. Thankyou for reading and taking the time out to tell me you enjoyed it. Jenny.

 

Submitted by MistakenMagic on
Beautiful poem, Jenny. And very wise words indeed! Lovely :) Magic xxx

 

Submitted by skinner_jennifer on
Thankyou so much Magic, it's very kind of you to let me know you enjoyed this poem. Thankyou again for reading and commenting. Jenny.xxx