IT'S IN HIS KISS ( I. P. )
By skinner_jennifer
Mon, 30 May 2011
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You know when your in love
it's not a look...or a touch,
but that tender kiss
that makes you go weak...
so you forget everything
but that kiss,
flesh trembles...body weak,
anticipation of that kiss...
a brush of his lips
across my cheek
as tenderly our lips meet,
passion builds at the
gentleness of his touch,
a fire building inside
rising like a Phoenix
from the ashes...
to that final explosion
as many fireworks
are released...
at the tenderness
of his kiss.
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new skinner_jennifer Ah!
Permalink Submitted by Cavalcader on
new skinner_jennifer
Ah! mine had go deleting trebles
comment tou you repeating taught me,
if delete then put a dot, then post comment button goes, but leaves name and space?
Computer was very sluggish yesterday like me
Sun is out. ok you to
you asked about Pinda's work, click
onto tutle on right here, then keep going
backwards on the numbers your find some..
julie xx
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So sorry about getting to
Permalink Submitted by Silver Spun Sand on
So sorry about getting to this one late, Jenny and I have more episodes of your story to catch up on too, and I promise I will, tomorrow at the latest.
I think Rachel sums up this lovely poem so very aptly when she says 'it is a kiss to the senses'.
Really beautiful, this one;-)
Tina
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great description of what it
great description of what it feels like inside :-)
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