IT'S IN HIS KISS ( I. P. )

By skinner_jennifer

Mon, 30 May 2011
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37 comments
 

You know when your in love
it's not a look...or a touch,
but that tender kiss
that makes you go weak...
so you forget everything
but that kiss,

flesh trembles...body weak,
anticipation of that kiss...
a brush of his lips
across my cheek
as tenderly our lips meet,

passion builds at the
gentleness of his touch,
a fire building inside
rising like a Phoenix
from the ashes...
to that final explosion
as many fireworks
are released...
at the tenderness
of his kiss.

Certificate 15
Poems
Love

Comments

Submitted by Highhat on
Very passionate Jenny. A good one for the IP ;)Pia

Submitted by skinner_jennifer on
Thankyou so much Pia, glad you could see the passion in this poem. Thankyou for your kind words, you know it's always appreciated. Jenny.

 

Submitted by well-wisher on
I thought that you structured the poem very well so as to best convey the idea of passion building inside. I really like the way that the last part of the poem climbs towards a climax. passion builds at the gentleness of his touch, a fire building inside rising like a Phoenix from the ashes... to that final explosion as many fireworks are released... at the tenderness of his kiss.

Oh look, a link. I wonder where it leads.

JoHn

Submitted by well-wisher on
I thought that you structured the poem very well so as to best convey the idea of passion building inside. I really like the way that the last part of the poem climbs towards a climax. passion builds at the gentleness of his touch, a fire building inside rising like a Phoenix from the ashes... to that final explosion as many fireworks are released... at the tenderness of his kiss.

Oh look, a link. I wonder where it leads.

JoHn

Submitted by Cavalcader on
new skinner_jennifer Great one for the (IP) stanza lines: Rising like a phoenix from the ashes... to that explosion as many fireworks are released... at the tenderness of his kiss. Strange I was only singing indoors the "It's in his kiss". Was it "The Supremes."

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Submitted by seashore on
A good one Jenny

Submitted by maisie on
the ending is superb!

maisie angel Guess what?  I'm still alive!

Submitted by skinner_jennifer on
Hello well-wisher, thankyou for reading, it's nice to know you thought the structure of the piece was fine. I always appreciate your comments, so thankyou for letting me know. Jenny.

 

Submitted by skinner_jennifer on
Hi julie, glad you enjoyed reading this piece, it's really kind of you to let me know your thoughts. That record you're on about, I've heard it before, it's an old sixties song, but I have'nt got a clue who it's by, perhaps someone else knows. Anyway hope you're having a great bank holiday Monday, you take care, and thankyou for reading. Jenny.

 

Submitted by skinner_jennifer on
Hello seashore, glad you liked this piece, thankyou also for letting me know, it's much appreciated. Hope you are having a great bank holiday Monday. Jenny.

 

Submitted by skinner_jennifer on
Hi Maisie, I'm so happy you liked the ending, I suppose it kind of brings it all together. Thankyou for reading and letting me know, always appreciated. Have a great Bank Holiday Monday. Jenny.

 

Submitted by Cavalcader on
new skinner_jennifer Sorry computer is playing up, comment to you gone on three times. Although deleted twice. Maybe better put my glasses on. Not gone out cold, yes, and you have good bank holiday. He's gone bowls, I can concentrat more when he isn't in, and t.v was on. Nuisance.So go from one room to another. Cloudy. You take care, I have watched you come up the ladder so brilliantly, with your poems. May I say Ask Tina she will know the song I am sure. My time so many.Another little gem for the (IP) Oh! dear I am deleting them computer is nutty! not deleting. julie xx

Submitted by skinner_jennifer on
That's okay julie, don't worry I understand, I have had problems with my computer in the past, so I know exactly where you're coming from. Also I know what it's like when you're trying to read and there's loads of noise going on in the background. Thankyou for coming back to me with another great comment. Jenny.

 

Submitted by Mangone on
I agree with Pia - Very passionate, Jenny! As to the song, there are a few versions, Julie, Cher’s is good bit I reckon this is the best - http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=dV4aywItsKI

Submitted by skinner_jennifer on
Thankyou for your kind comment Mangone. Also how could I have forgotton that wonderful version by the amazing Cher. Thanks for clearing that up, even though I know it's not the original. Thankyou again for reading and commenting. Jenny.

 

Submitted by Mangone on
Have you noticed the 'Love Has Gone' post by Pinda, Jenny? Unexpected...

Submitted by Highhat on
Mangone- Pinda's record company and friends are posting some of the things he left behind. ;)Pia

Submitted by fatboy74 on
Really enjoying your poetry Jenny. :-)

 

Submitted by skinner_jennifer on
Hi Mangone, No I didn't notice it had gone, I do know like Pia said, that his record label are posting his work. But that is very strange. Thanks for coming back to me. Jenny.

 

Submitted by skinner_jennifer on
Hello fb, Thankyou for letting me know you're reading and enjoying my poetry, it's much appreciated. Hope you are now over the worst of your work load and able to relax a bit. Take care. Jenny.

 

Submitted by V.C.Willow on
Like the others I though this was a great poem. Like the building of pace in line with the building passion. Hope your well Jenny V.C P.S What does I.P stand for - know I will kick myself when you tell me but its driving me mad- can't work it out

Submitted by skinner_jennifer on
Hi there V.C. First I'd like to say thankyou so much for reading this poem and letting me know your thoughts. It was really nice to hear from you. I'm well, hope you are too. I.P. stands for Inspiration point. Each week Tony gives you a subject or idea for a story, or poem, or whatever you want to write, just to, as he would say, 'get your taste buds going.' Don't worry about not knowing, I didn't even know what a cherry was for, when I first came on here, I just thought it was a pretty picture in the corner of the writing. Hope that's helped, Oh! you normally get the I.P. come up in the New forum topics, on the right hand side. Thanks again for your kind comment. Jenny.

 

Submitted by ScoZen on
Ahh, Jen "...as many fireworks are released..." I'm off to buy a box of squibs.
ScoZen

Submitted by oldpesky on
Hi Jennifer, you are definitely on fire this week. this is sizzlingly good.

Submitted by skinner_jennifer on
Hi there again ScoZen, you could send some rockets up for me please! Thanks for your message, you make me laugh! Jenny.

 

Submitted by skinner_jennifer on
Hi there oldpesky, thanks for your sizzling great comment, it was red hot! Hope you're having a great week. Jenny.

 

Submitted by RachelPatricia on
Beautiful, passionate and gently alluring, this one, Jenny! One of my favourites of yours for sure - this poem is a kiss to the senses all in itself, I loved it :) Rachel xx

Submitted by skinner_jennifer on
Hello Rachel, good to hear from you, hope you are having a good week. I really love that comment, 'a kiss to the senses,' really beautiful. Thankyou for reading and thankyou for letting me know, it's always appreciated. Jenny.xx

 

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