Artist's Impression

Cherry

By Silver Spun Sand

Sat, 04 Jun 2011
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26 comments
 

Chinese White –
his canvas
as he defines,
translates,
explores
her every contour;

the concave curve
of her hips
the sweat
between her breasts
glistening
in the lamplight.

His tongue –
the brush,
as he dips it
in her every colour
of love
and takes great pains
to go outside
the lines...

Certificate 12
Poem
Silver Spun Sand Poems
Love

Comments

Submitted by Highhat on
excellent Tina especially these lines which I like the best "and takes great pains to go outside the lines" ;)Pia

Submitted by Silver Spun Sand on
Many thanks, Pia;-) My favourite lines too;-) Tina

 

Submitted by maisie on
and i like the first stanza best. its a good poem overall :)

maisie angel Guess what?  I'm still alive!

Submitted by Silver Spun Sand on
Thanks for reading, Maisie. Pleased you liked;-) Tina

 

Submitted by Silver Spun Sand on
Pleased you liked this one, Nathan and thanks for telling me. Tina xx

 

Submitted by ScoZen on
Ahh dear Sand Lady. Not in the style of Jackson Pollock I hope.
ScoZen

Submitted by Silver Spun Sand on
;-) Sand Lady

 

Submitted by seashore on
Superb...and love the ending

Submitted by Silver Spun Sand on
Many thanks for reading, Coral. Glad you liked it;-) Tina

 

Submitted by skinner_jennifer on
what can I say? but simply beautiful Tina. Jenny.

 

Submitted by Silver Spun Sand on
Many thanks, Jenny;-) Tina

 

Submitted by Cavalcader on
new Silver-Spun-Sand Wow, Certainly begins explosive. I can imagine you painting. julie xx

Submitted by Silver Spun Sand on
Explosive is a good word, Julie. Pleased you enjoyed;-) Tina xx

 

Submitted by Dark Fox on
Simply sensual and poetic, so very beautiful.

Kayleigh Nichols

Submitted by Silver Spun Sand on
Many thanks, Dark Fox. Glad you thought so;-) Tina

 

Submitted by JoseHdz on
it's all been said. absolutely adore this! cheers, Jose

Submitted by Silver Spun Sand on
Thanks, Jose;-) Have a good week. Tina

 

Submitted by Cavalcader on
new Silver-Spun-Sand So sorry I read bit of name, like your's on here, after reading one of your exceptional poems, put two and two to-gether thinking you,not so deleted it. Maybe next great poetry see you there.But your poetry is explosive with words,well use it then. I am trying find the englsih words I remember bit song Euro "Non Non Let'a" by Cigliola Cingquetti" just found in search" played great takes me back, as music so expensive buy This my prayer my only prayer as the day breaks and all is still.etc. Beautiful.Pop star opera last night did you see Joe..all fab Katherine Jenkins. julie xx

Submitted by Silver Spun Sand on
Glad you liked this, Julie...and yes, I remember that song which won the Eurovision Song Contest in the late fifties, early sixties. The Italian entry I think. And I also watched, last night, Pop Star to Opera Star, and saw Katherine Jenkins. She was fabulous, as also was the woman who used to be in Bucks Fizz, whose name escapes me for the moment;-) Have a good week;-) Tina xx

 

Submitted by Cavalcader on
new Silver-Spun-Sand H! Tina,Thanks answer. Went into search came up, by "Cigliola Cinquetti" and we have, what's it called turn on switch play great,see her singing 1983 or 1966.But no lines in english. Strangely enough someone now done a story, think Spanish on AbcTales. Not got nerve to ask. yes, opera great Cheryl Baker and pop star Jo- Mc Elderry. Memory escapes me. Three or four and me going n/home to-morrow sing a long, not on my own do it.Unless asked.Mine just booked BGT coming B/ton centre, as said, only back seats £35 each that's alot, he is down there. Caused laugh here trying opera bit it. But can be easier than ordinary songs, do you think. Have a good week and many thanks.The accident was chair lift. 28 48 hours, before anyone new awful. Don't do so much regular house work now.If busy. julie xx

Submitted by barryj1 on
Absolutely dazzling! Your infinite restraint here is at the heart of (yet another) perfect poem.

barryj1

Submitted by Silver Spun Sand on
Thanks, so very much, barry. Pleased you thought so, and took the time to tell me;-) Tina

 

Submitted by Dynamaso on
I hope he's using water-soluble paints, Tina :) I don't know how you consistently turn out such gems, but I'm glad you do.

 

Submitted by Silver Spun Sand on
Definitely water-soluble, Mark;-) Pleased you liked...now it's back to the drawing board. Tina

 

Submitted by MistakenMagic on
Absolutely stunning, Tina. A brilliant set of metaphors - I've never dated a painter myself, but I bet it would be a lot of fun ;) Magic xxx

 

Submitted by Silver Spun Sand on
I bet it would too;-) Tina xxx